great stuff there.. the beginning seemed a little off time
but as an overall very good song.. the vocals sounded great but lacked some passion.

i agree with the comment on how it resembles U2
good job

i have a similar vid on youtube
rate it back for me- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZlaopV_NHuE
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