declaringsunday
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2008
186 IQ
#1
Ok...here's the little I made a few weeks ago..It's just simple song with Guitar,drums and a bass....the solo is simple but I like it .....C4C??
Attachments:
if and only.zip
bloodshed344
UG Newbie
Join date: Nov 2007
1,673 IQ
#2
I don't think you should have that drum stop in every chorus, just the first and maybe the last one. Love the intro (It's kinda creepy compared to the rest of the song) the verses and the outro. Solo is really good as well, nicely used sweeping. That's about all there is to say, pretty good.

If you wanna crit, I would suggest Bubble Toad because it just seems like something you could handle more than my other stuff, compared to this song.