I don't think you should have that drum stop in every chorus, just the first and maybe the last one. Love the intro (It's kinda creepy compared to the rest of the song) the verses and the outro. Solo is really good as well, nicely used sweeping. That's about all there is to say, pretty good.

If you wanna crit, I would suggest Bubble Toad because it just seems like something you could handle more than my other stuff, compared to this song.