#2
nice,
did you played the harmonica? it added a lot to this song
well, the guitar was okay...nothing to be impressed by but still, it's simple and regular for this song and that's good for this song too
your voice is very nice, feet the song,
this song is pretty simple but good and you did it was very nice in my opinion, good work
#3
The Harmonica was a very good touch.
The guitar was simple like the last poster said but this is a simple song.
I liked how your vocals showed some feeling and it showed you were totally into playing the song.
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