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#1
So, me and some friends are writing a book about 4 kids in highschool.I need some plots and storyline.
Help me out pit.
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#3
I know this post is unhelpful and unnecessary, so apologies, but from the information you have given, I'm guessing this will be the worst book ever. You don't even know what the storyline is!
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#4
That why Im asking you people.
I just want some creative ideas and if you cant come up with any i guess we will.
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#5
2 of the kids get kidnapped by some looneys and the others try to find them even though they're unarmed. Someone falls in love with someone who gets killed later on and then that person kills his or herself. In the end they find the 2 kids that get kidnapped and find them having a party with some grizzly bears in a cocktail bar.
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#6
You know asking the pit for a plotline is not writing a book. The pit would sue you for copyright infringement (yes, everything we say is copyrighted immediately). Then the pit would rape you. After taking everything you own through a court of law.
#7
It could be worse.
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#8
You're writing a book, but you don't know what the book is about...?

I write scripts, which is a pretty similar process, and knowing what you're going to write about is typically the first step.
#9
We now what we want to write about, but Im just seeing if the pit has anthin better or anything we could add in the story.
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#10
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You know asking the pit for a plotline is not writing a book. The pit would sue you for copyright infringement (yes, everything we say is copyrighted immediately). Then the pit would rape you. After taking everything you own through a court of law.


This man is correct.
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#11
I got an original one for you:
The friends make a pact to get laid by the end of the school year/graduation. Much hilarity ensues along the way and silly situations are abundant.

You fill in the rest.
#14
So far its 4 kids who have nothing to do with eachother, then a tragic thing happens and they come together to solve the problem.
2 boys
2 girls
girl 1lieks -boy2
girl2 lieks-boy1
boy 1 lieks-girl1
boy2 lieks-girl2
but both boys mistakingly think girls are trannys.
Im not going into great detail here but this is the basic.
Its a humor book.
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#15
Quote by c3powil
So far its 4 kids who have nothing to do with eachother, then a tragic thing happens and they come together to solve the problem.
2 boys
2 girls
girl 1lieks -boy2
girl2 lieks-boy1
boy 1 lieks-girl1
boy2 lieks-girl2
but both boys mistakingly think girls are trannys.
Im not going into great detail here but this is the basic.



Wow, this sounds so promising . . .
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#16
i'd say kinda modify **** that happens to you and them so they r more intresting
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#17
Quote by c3powil
So far its 4 kids who have nothing to do with eachother, then a tragic thing happens and they come together to solve the problem.
2 boys
2 girls
girl 1lieks -boy2
girl2 lieks-boy1
boy 1 lieks-girl1
boy2 lieks-girl2
but both boys mistakingly think girls are trannys.
Im not going into great detail here but this is the basic.
Its a humor book.

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#18
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I was going to help you out.


Long story short, I'm not going to anymore.


well, your a fat sack of crap!
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#19
That could quite possibly be one of the worst things I've ever read.

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wat

#20
Quote by c3powil
So far its 4 kids who have nothing to do with eachother, then a tragic thing happens and they come together to solve the problem.
2 boys
2 girls
girl 1lieks -boy2
girl2 lieks-boy1
boy 1 lieks-girl1
boy2 lieks-girl2
but both boys mistakingly think girls are trannys.
Im not going into great detail here but this is the basic.
Its a humor book.

Sounds like a snooze fest to me.

They mistakingly think girls are trannies? How long could that last?

"Dude, I think she's a he!"

"Yeah, me too!"

*some pointless paragraphs*

"Hey, girl 1 and 2, are you trannies?"

"Nope"
"Not uh"

"Oh..."
#21
good luck.

you'll need either that, or an idiot audience.
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#22
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I got an original one for you:
The friends make a pact to get laid by the end of the school year/graduation. Much hilarity ensues along the way and silly situations are abundant.

You fill in the rest.



This man/boy wrote what i was thinking so +1
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#23
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but both boys mistakingly think girls are trannys.



Wait, what?
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#24
Quote by Archaon
I got an original one for you:
The friends make a pact to get laid by the end of the school year/graduation. Much hilarity ensues along the way and silly situations are abundant.

You fill in the rest.


There's more hilarity in this post than in that entire movie!
(Still a good movie though)

TS: What about one where the four kids are trying to start a band, but there is one arrogant fool among the bunch determined to ruin it?
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#25
You neglected to mention what kind of book itt is. Is it romance, comedy, what? Maybe you could have them in class one day and there's a lockdown and one of them saves the others from some crazy gun-wielding psychopath.
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#26
Make it so throughout the whole book everything is perfect and heartfelt and inspiring, like they all get through some terrible times through the first half and the second half they all are fuffilling their dreams and whatnot, and then have them all get killed in a drunken car crash at the end.
#27
Publish a journal of every **** you take during the coarse of one year, describing each **** in great detail ( time taken, approximate wieght/length, color, visible foods ). Try to include photos.

I
would read it.
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#28
Quote by c3powil
So, me and some friends are writing a book about 4 kids in highschool.I need some plots and storyline.
Help me out pit.

You are writing a book with some friends.

There's bound to be enough creative intelligence within that group to at least generate a decent storyline.
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#29
4 Kids+Highschool=Worst book ever, no matter what the plot is
#30
ok so the books about 4 guys that do some crazy **** right. they end up killing someone on accident so now theyre on trial. in the end it turns out that the "4 guys" is actually one guy with multiple personalities
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Publish a journal of every **** you take during the coarse of one year, describing each **** in great detail ( time taken, approximate wieght/length, color, visible foods ). Try to include photos.

I
would read it.



At least this is original.


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#32
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There's more hilarity in this post than in that entire movie!
(Still a good movie though)

TS: What about one where the four kids are trying to start a band, but there is one arrogant fool among the bunch determined to ruin it?



And he'll have long ginger hair and a drinking problem...
#33
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We now what we want to write about, but Im just seeing if the pit has anthin better or anything we could add in the story.

make them all addicted to wine coolers
it'd be funny
#34
One kid is blind deaf and dumb, another is his evil cousin, the other is his sexually abusive uncle.
#35
they find pot and get into a porno store lol
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#36
Four friends end the Internet

And then in the future, in real life, when the Internet has already ended, people will read your book and think, "OMG! whas dis intertubes tehy spek uv?" By that time, thanks to the Internet, people will no longer know how to write or talk normally and when the Internet died, people felt so guilty that they adopted 1337 speak into everyday conversations. After passing it on to the next few generations, the Internet was forgotten, but the grammar (or lack thereof) remained

Actually, write a book about that before I do.
#37
Quote by spartan 118
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TS: What about one where the four kids are trying to start a band, but there is one arrogant fool among the bunch determined to ruin it?


have that happen, then intertwine a plot line of a werewolf infestation, while they're quarantined in their school grounds (which happens to be a rather large school ground) and there has to be a battle between a guitarist doing a solo to try to kill of a werewolf overlord, to save one of the girls. all in first person. and at one point they have to try to fight off the werewolves with a water ballon launcher loaded with watermelons.
if you use this idea and it becomes a hit....then i want a copy haha.

EDIT: If you dont use this idea, then i will haha.
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Sounds like a snooze fest to me.

They mistakingly think girls are trannies? How long could that last?

"Dude, I think she's a he!"

"Yeah, me too!"

*some pointless paragraphs*

"Hey, girl 1 and 2, are you trannies?"

"Nope"
"Not uh"

"Oh..."


I lol'd.

I think one of them should have AIDS and their mission is to figure out how to solve this problem. This is also after a huge nuclear war, so they find Mel Gibson and ask him to help them. For him to help them though, he needs them to attack a gang who has a huge tanker full of oil so he can fill up his car. So this kids plan an attack but get found out by some other group of good guys, these guys get attacked by the bad guys and Mel saves everyone.... there I've started!
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#40
write about your own high school experiences?
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