sounds kind of cool, personally if i made an instrumental about him i wouldve done it more psychotic/evil sounding, but thats just me, yours however is really good i like it a lot
"I just want to conquer people and their souls."
-Mike Tyson
thanks for the good words guys

the actual instrumental is really based off of his most famous nickname "the Clown Prince of Crime"

So first part you can hear the "crime" and second part you hear the "clown"
My username is old, don't judge me (but old 311 is good)