check out this recording made inliterally tenmin its sick please tell mewhat you thinkleave comment

its called messing with recording stuff hope you like it

Totally sick, eh?

-drums sound way better than the other clip you posted
-content sounds like a good jam - the beat and the vibe work, nice licks and stuff.

-a few timing and tuning issues - esp with guitar.
-mix is just plain bad. Guitars are unbalanced among themselves, and in any case, are the loudest thing in the mix, totally overpowering everything else; you can't hear the bass for the most part

-Turn this groove into a song. Add some lyrics and make this good jam go somewhere.
-spend a bit more time rehearsing to avoid timing issues.
-double-check tuning with a tuner before recording
-spend more than ten minutes on it. There is no reason why you couldn't get a more balanced mix if you spent even another five minutes on it.

Could I get some more talent in the monitors, please?

I know it sounds crazy, but try to learn to inhale your voice. www.thebelcantotechnique.com

Chris is the king of relating music things to other objects in real life.