Jaxoo
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Join date: Nov 2006
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#1
This is a piece I wrote one day, began with the intro which i made when i was stuffing around, and i liked it so i wrote the rest.

I will gladly C4C, so give me your opinion please.

Thanks.
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Under The Sun.zip
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Slaytanic1993
Wakka wakka
Join date: Jun 2007
2,620 IQ
#2
I like the melodic/happy feel to this in the intro, it honestly reminds me of the "Breezy" song from Final Fantasy VIII at first. The halfway point reminded of a nursery rhyhme, and the bit before the outro was just awesome as well, almost classical sounding.


Mine: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=914622
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dminishedthingy
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Join date: Apr 2008
806 IQ
#3
Very good, i could see this turning into quite an epic instrumental if other instruments were added
it flows quite well, the riffs transitioned very smoothly
i really liked the fast breaks toward the end as well
you should look into turning this into an actual song!

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Imperial Throg
..And your wee doggie too
Join date: Jul 2007
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#4
I really liked that, it flowed really well and would sound awesdome recorded, can't really think of bad points in it. It'd be good as a sort of instrymental bass bit played just by itself I think, the you could use it kind of like an introduction if you know what I mean(like Sabbaths Orchid before Lord of this World), but I think if you added other instruments it would sound a bitr overdone, its really nice the way it is.



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VieNam
UG's Chinaman
Join date: Nov 2007
1,061 IQ
#5
very nice
Shred Head
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