#1
This is a rough draft of my new song. Im still looking for singer so no singing like my other recordings. No drums either. I just want opinions on the guitar and everything. The final version will have a piano/guitar outro kinda like november rain not really but u get the idea.

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Slashified/

please just be honest, thats all i want to know is how i can improve
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#3
Sounds pretty good. The guitar in the ending was very good; very dramatic and emotional. There was one part in the beginning where you could have played cleaner, but I think anyone who wasn't trying to be a picky asshole would notice. The tone was very good on the guitar, but I think with a little tweaking you could make it perfect - at a couple parts it sounded odd to me. Very good job though, I'd say 9/10.
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#4
the intro was very mood setting/creepy. your guitar sounds a tiny bit out of tune. you also have some minor clipping issues. the chord proggression is awesome. brilliant idea. the chorus has some timing issues. i though the distorted tone could be less fuzzy...i'm not sure how you could achieve that.

one thing i think you could do is to make a double section ( like where the solo comes in freebird)

the soloing was good as usual. you have a real talent for lead guitar.

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#5
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the intro was very mood setting/creepy. your guitar sounds a tiny bit out of tune. you also have some minor clipping issues. the chord proggression is awesome. brilliant idea. the chorus has some timing issues. i though the distorted tone could be less fuzzy...i'm not sure how you could achieve that.

one thing i think you could do is to make a double section ( like where the solo comes in freebird)

the soloing was good as usual. you have a real talent for lead guitar.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=902160


yea I agree with everything u said. Especially the double section, I need something leading up to the solo
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#7
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Pretty heavy on hte distortion if you ask me...Pretty straightforward song, nothing spectacular...although im not big into classic rock so maybe i ont have a taste for this style. Cool intro to start things off..how did you create that?

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=915698


not really the kind of crit im lookin for
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#8
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not really the kind of crit im lookin for



SOrry my crit was inadequte...it was a nice way of me saying I didn't like it.

As your thread states, C4C? Thanks