#1
Hi, it's my first "music", I will finish it.

It is better with RSE, but there's no problem, I've made 2 versions.

Please comment.
Attachments:
Intro.zip
#2
short, but quite the nice listen. it all worked. I don't know what to tell you, cause I don't have much to crit. but what you have sounds good.

and the riff is nice and soothing. get this going man!
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...