#1
newest song... care to crit?


This was no accident
So hide the children
Pray for forgiveness
The end is near, the end is now
Sound the alarm
We’re ready for battle
I’ll aim for your heart
We’ll take the town, lets take ‘em down
(Who’s with us?)

Sent forth from the wreckage, I was left with nothing but false convictions
Settling for the next best thing has given me these damn addictions
I have tried and I have fought but nothing pulls me through it
I guess Im doomed (I guess Im doomed) to be the one thats ruined

The nights on fire
Just save yourself
Find your own way home
The war is here, the war is on
The time is ours now
We will show no mercy
We take no prisoners
Lets burn the town, we’ll burn ‘em down
(where are the matches?)

Sent forth from the wreckage, I alone hold the scars to prove it
Settling for the next best thing was the cause of my undoing
I have tried and I have fought but the answers never come to me
I guess Im doomed (I guess Im doomed) to be my own worst enemy.
If to live is to die, then is to die to live? Thats a bunch of S_H_I_T.
#2
i really liked it...i guess i'm more of a war guy... but one thing is that i think the word, matches, seems a little weak for that line. burnin' down the town, i'm not reaching for the matches...
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