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I'm extremely new to making my own music, and I made this riff earlier today. I know, I didn't play it as well as I usually do, but when I record I mess up for some reason, I concentrate too much I guess. But what do you guys think? Thanks, critisizm is welcome!

RIFF

NOTE: In the middle I changed it a bit, that's not part of the riff I origionally wrote, just kinda played it for no reason... I can give tabs if anyone wants them for more help.