BE WARNED!! I suck at English. I can't rhyme at all. But, I know what I'm going for in this and any help would be appreciated. This is my first take on a song/poetry ever!

I think it’s funny
When all the people stop and stare
At the Kid with brown hair.

He looks like a freak
He is treated like a geek.
He Know what he wants in life.
And that is all that matters to him.

In high school, he didn’t get any attention
From any of the girls that was worth his time.
He didn’t get any detention
So, you wouldn’t think he was cool

He looks like a freak
He’s treated like a geek
But, you couldn’t treat him normal
Because you wouldn’t give him the time.

Out on his own, he knows no bounds
No one to
Last edited by night_elf2004 at Jul 22, 2008,