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Hello, i made this lyrics about 1 month ago but, i usually write in Spanish, and this is my first English Song, so please tell me what is wrong or what is right, so i can keep writing in English!. Also, if you have any ideas plase let me know about them!
thanks!!

It's benn writed inspired on: "Missing you" and "Silent is the Rain" by Ark
[Idea: One guy who is on his last day of living remembers all the good things in his life or something like that :P]

               THE LAST HOUR
Here i stand, crying to the skies, trying to forget
Close’s my resting time, now I got to find, all those loved ones…

Walking with you, searching for your smile, just enjoying the night
Because tonight, maybe my last, I’ll be free again

You’ll find me somewhere
Maybe in another life
Just try to understand
That my life is gone

Tear my soul apart
From my flesh and bones
Is what my heart feels like
As day goes passing by…

Goodbye my friend
You must carry on tomorrow
When im gone, when im finally there
But i appreciate your concern

Goodbye my friend
You must carry on tomorrow
When im gone, when im finally there
But i appreciate your concern

Goodbye my friend
You must carry on tomorrow
When im gone, when im finally there
But i appreciate your concern

Walking with you, searching for your smile, just enjoying the night
Because tonight, maybe my last, I’ll be free again

Walking one last road, so my soul can find peace… tonight