#1
This is an acoustic song and looking for some advice. Feel free to tell me what you think. As ever, any comments are appreciated. it's called "See right through you".

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#3
The first thing i thought was that the bass panned totally to the left got a little annoying. And the licks in some places aren't totally clean. But the feel is awesome ! Good singing and song writing.
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#4
the vocals are weird (you must of had too much pitch correction) I like the chord progression and the lead play
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#5
Thanks for the crit. Just wanted to say the voacls may sound a bit weird because there is a slight doubling effect on them.
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#7
sorry but i can't give crit. the link is not working. ^^
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