#2
singer needs to work on the lows, they just dont sound right, and the strummed part for lack of a better term doesnt seem to fit. all in all not bad but needs work.
#3
The vocals are kinda weak and spaced out IMO. The riffs were pretty much just chuggity chuggity chuggity, except for what I think was the chorus, which I am 100% I have heard in similar variations many times before.
I didn't find anything about the song particularly drawing.

But good luck to you guys.

EDIT: And I think the drums could've used some reverb.
Last edited by AA00P at Jul 23, 2008,
#4
To be honest, that was one of the most unoriginal things I've heard in a long time.
#5
Sorry guys, one fan you wont ever get with that song right here. I hope that's not seriously the song name lol. And your definately right about the low vocals.. sounded baad. But as far as the guitar playing, since this is a guitar player website.. very novice work. If you wanna impress someone with a song like that you're gonna HAVE to be a little more original and innovative. But like was said above, good luck.
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