Firstly, nice voice! I enjoyed the song, but I'm not quite sure if the chorus stood out enough. Would be great to hear a strong, possibly slightly higher note, especially with your good singing voice, just for a bit of a more climatic chorus. Guitar playing is good, and the overall backing track is great in my opinion. The song is exceptional, only what I said about the chorus is what I have against it.

A crit on my instrumental would be great (in the sig)