#1
Hi. I'm 15 years old and I've been playing guitar for a few months now. One day I want to be in a band
so I decided I should try and write some lyrics. I tried reading up some information and getting some tips
but they just ended up confusing me so I just put pen to paper and wrote and this is what I got. It's probably
retarded compared to what most of the guys who come in here write but I guess the only way I can improve
is by getting criticism. I'm fully expecting people telling me to never write again.

Oh, fickle girl
Why'd you do this to me?
Yesterday I was so sure
Now I'm full of doubts
So full now I can't bring myself to say it
What the hell am I doing?

How did this happen?
Planned for so long; all gone wrong
My eyes go cold, my bottom lips shaking
I can't believe this

Fickle girl,
you are not helping
With your not so silent demands
This is so easy for easy you
But you hate to be the one to bare the bad news
You leave me hopeful
even though you know theres none

How did this happen?
Planned for so long; all gone wrong
My eyes go cold, my bottom lips shaking
Why'd you do this to me
Fickle girl?
#2
Hi man,

welcome to UG S&L. Please take some time and read the rules before you post a thread in the forum. This thread is in violation of one of the rules, specifically the section about titles.

Please go read through the rules once, and once you have done so, repost this correctly.

Hope you stick around and thanks for your time,

-zC