#1
The plane of our lives,
crashes down in your eyes.
I dont wanna say goodbye
I dont wanna see u leave.
tonight.
Last edited by RIOTex at Jul 27, 2008,
#2
Haha going for the short and sweet, eh? Is this fast paced or slow paced may I ask? Well either way I like it. The symbolism in "the plane" is fantastic.

Nice piece ya got there
#3
thanks and its slow paced and its only short because thats all ive got so far