danastasi
UG's Metal Maniac!
Join date: May 2005
1,610 IQ
#1
Hey guys,

Heres a song I wrote recently, entitled 'The burning legions," and was just after a little feedack, apart from it being too short Sort of a melodic death metal styled song...Maybe wintersun, insomnium, ensiferum?

Please only post constructive comments. Thanks.

If you hate it, either post something constructive or don't post at all.

Any critisism would be appreciated - I'm only posting to see how you guys think I can improve it.

Thanks guys, appreciated,

Dan

(btw my winzip isnt working properly, so if this doesn't work, please post and I'll try to fix it. Cheers)
Attachments:
Metal Song.zip
Gear List;

Laney VH100R with Matching Cab
Ibanez RGT42FM
Schecter C-1+
BC Rich Neck Thru Warlock
ISP Noise Decimator
Ibanez TS9
Last edited by danastasi at Jul 27, 2008,
K!nj!
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2007
342 IQ
#2
it sounds wierd....imagine a metalhead playing tetris,sounds like powertab
Ibanez RGA 8 (Dimarzio D Activator 8)->Rocktron Hush->Engl E530 preamp->Marshall 9200 poweramp->Marshall 4x12 closed back cab w/ G12t75's
danastasi
UG's Metal Maniac!
Join date: May 2005
1,610 IQ
#3
Yeah,

That's why I said imagine it played with real instruments (I know what you mean though...) btw I don't play drums or bass, only guitar atm. I know its fairly simple but I think it works.

Thanks ^ K!nj!

Dan
Gear List;

Laney VH100R with Matching Cab
Ibanez RGT42FM
Schecter C-1+
BC Rich Neck Thru Warlock
ISP Noise Decimator
Ibanez TS9
danastasi
UG's Metal Maniac!
Join date: May 2005
1,610 IQ
#4
^^Import it into GP5 and turn on the RSE...

Sounds loads better.

Dan
Gear List;

Laney VH100R with Matching Cab
Ibanez RGT42FM
Schecter C-1+
BC Rich Neck Thru Warlock
ISP Noise Decimator
Ibanez TS9
FlyingPooooo
Pardon the Insolence
Join date: Jul 2007
1,521 IQ
#5
Very nice man, only small thing I dont like is the constant 16th note or 32nd note kick bass.
Everything else is great.

The melodies are amazing, I need to learn a few things from you.
-Gear-
Mesa Triple Rectifier---Bogner/Line6 SpiderValve---Orange PPC 4x12

-Pedalboard/Rackmount-
Alesis MidiVerb4--BBE SonicMaximizer 442--Ibanez TS9
Boss DD-3--Morley Mark Tremonti Wah

-Guitars-
Ibanez ART-100
Ibanez S-470
danastasi
UG's Metal Maniac!
Join date: May 2005
1,610 IQ
#6
Thanks pooooo!

Means a lot hey...

I know about the bass drums - I love my double kicks man....Too much obviously

Thanks for the kind words, I knew it wasn't as bad as K!nj! made out...

As for learning - I dunno about that mate, but fire away

Cheers,

Dan
Gear List;

Laney VH100R with Matching Cab
Ibanez RGT42FM
Schecter C-1+
BC Rich Neck Thru Warlock
ISP Noise Decimator
Ibanez TS9