#1
C4C
It needs a little work on the chorus. I'd aprreciate some constructive criticism to make the song better. It flows alright when singing with my band, but definetly needs a few tweaks. thanks!

There's creatures roamin 'round, everywhere I turn
There crawling all upon me, like maggots and worms
There searching for my life line, cause they think I'm dead
But there wrong to search my body, it's not there!

It's in my head
I said it's in my head
You can't take this away from me
It's all in my head

Why do you want the answers? They make the fun last
Your stupid questions bore me, they make me mad
I'm tired of empty heads, Staring with their empty eyes
I'm gonna have to open you up, I'm gonna have to take you inside

It's in my head
I said it's in my head
You can't take this away from me
It's all in my head

You think you woulda learned when I taught you last
You stupid race of zombies don't think but act too fast
So see what you've done! Your killing yourselves!
I prayed it wouldn't happen but I had to leave this hell!

I went into the tunnel without a second glance back
You should've followed me baby, now you're dead!

But i'm in my head
Ya i'm in my head
You can't take this away from me
I'm in my head