I have a new acoustic song that's still very rough and does need work...but i'd like to see what people think of it thus far...song is in my profile and crit for crit as always. thanks. it's called "friend".
it was great except for two things which stood out to me.

1)the intro. i wasn't feeling it. sorry
2)the singing wasn't great. i think it was because of the quality, it may not be your voice but it didn't sound too great.

i loved it none the less. great work.