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Hey UG`ers
Here some lyrics I wrote, Its the same as my previous song (that thread was closed, I had no title on it so here it is again)
The beat will be 120 bpm
The style is: Nu-Metal,Rapcore,Beat Metal
Special thanks to: Kidcrusher (check his myspace profile for some nice Horrorcore )
Hope to hear your opinions soon
ps.
Don`t say annything about grammatical mistakes (I`m 15 and Dutch so I can`t help it )

Enough talking here`s the song

Verse 1
Here I am lay to rest, betrayed, enslaved.
Cant feel, Cant think cause my mind is raped.
Thinking ..bout my soulmate who put her soul for sell
She will lay to rest, lay to rest in hell
Here I am lay to rest, while the world is bleeding.
They don't care, they just stare, they just take what they..re needing.
Now suicide is a culture, cut yourself whit a knife
Try to survive the conspiracy called life.

Chorus 2X.
Here I Lay to rest, on this F#cked up place.
Betrayed, enslaved by the human race
Here I Lay to rest, On this F#cked up place
Where I will lay to rest, till the end of my days

Verse 2
Here I lay to rest on a bleeding world
Where your own opinion is like a dirty word
Where human rights is like a dream so fake.
But in reality a nightmare, nobody tries to awake.
Here I lay to rest while the wordl is dying.
don't fool yourself, or take my words denying
I ain't no dreamer, or just pessimistic
Don..t call me an Emo, because my words are realistic.

Chorus 2X

Guitar Solo

Chorus a few more times

End..

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#2
Don..t call me an Emo, because my words are realistic.

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Reminds me of a certain lamb of god song :P
#3
Quote by nebno6
Don..t call me an Emo, because my words are realistic.

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Reminds me of a certain lamb of god song :P


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Dunno....Don`t listen to Lamb Of God