opc100
UG's Rex
Join date: Sep 2007
2,149 IQ
#2
it's quite relaxing at the start but then it never seems to go anywhere. i'd suggest making it longer and bring in some drums and a distorted guitar to give it a bit of oomph, but i'm trying to make this into a prog metal song
overall though, a nicely written song. 7/10
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~Sorry i's not a little longer, but when it's only a midi it's hard to crit properly, for me anyway.
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Last edited by opc100 at Jul 28, 2008,
SocialismCross
Registered User
Join date: Nov 2007
508 IQ
#3
well i don't think i'm going to say anything new, just make it go somewhere else, like add a minor chord that fits. and if you gonna make it longer, i'd recommened not having the same riff of that main acoustic guitar played over and over again.

besides that, i really like it.