#1
earth (a song for melissa)

Everywhere, life, birth
The world is a taunt
The world is still breathing
But you and what you’ve done
The total opposite of love
Your mountain of lies
My sky of hate
Raining down on you
Falling down
At your sides
Pooling into a river
Wasted time


I think its one of the best songs ive written in a long time, also i think its the best quality ive recorded.

you can check that out too if you want

http://www.myspace.com/iveonlybeenplayingforamonth
#2
Can't dude. It's got to be lyrics, rather than a full song, which should probably be done in riffs and recordings. Do a quick read of the rules, and you can post the lyrics.

*Reported*
#4
If it gets closed, I think you're allowed to post it again after reading the rules and making the proper changes. I don't know if you're allowed to post a link to a video/audio format or not.
#6
Quote by Ninjamonkey767
Can't dude. It's got to be lyrics, rather than a full song, which should probably be done in riffs and recordings. Do a quick read of the rules, and you can post the lyrics.

*Reported*

Failed to mention the title must be the title of the song.
Quote by ottoavist

i suppose there's a chance
i'm just a litte too shallow to consider
that maybe i've been a little more eager
each day to wake up and take a shower
brush my teeth and smile for the mirror