i liked the over all tone of it but i kinda felt like the lead was wandering aimlessly if you know what i mean. you might want to consider having a couple main ideas and trying to work around them a little more just to tie some of it together, but thats just me.
i have a few songs on my profile and here https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=919816 if you want to crit mine
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