#1
I drew this today. It's a pretty good summarization of some of my abstract-ish drawing skills. Please give me some tips on how to improve, and what I'm doing right and wrong.

Constructive criticism only, please! It's supposed to be, obviously, a Mayhem Festival poster/drawing/something.

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#2
better than i can do...no criticism here
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#5
the only thingi can say
is look up some other artists who do similar stuff to what you like
and Practice Practice Practice

i know it sounds dumb...but practicing isthe only way to improve
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#7
My friends don't think it's very tits on a whale, so come on, there's gotta be someone here to help me out. I mean, how hard is it to point out something bad? I know there's some really great artists on here. Like in those ms paint threads...
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#8
I LIKE THE BACKGROUND STUFF woah caps sorry

you need to work in your font a bit more
make it more eye catching
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#9
No really big criticism here, besides to practice to get better and better. I like it.
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#11
yeah try cross hatching some stuff
it gives things more depth
and it would go with your style of line drawing
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#12
um...the drippy parts below the 'M' look a bit unnatural.

overall, very nice.
#13
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My friends don't think it's very tits on a whale, so come on, there's gotta be someone here to help me out. I mean, how hard is it to point out something bad? I know there's some really great artists on here. Like in those ms paint threads...


It's definitely not tits on a whale.

I can't draw either, so... I think it's awesome though.
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#14
Wait, hold on...

Is tits on a whale just a general exclamation, or is it specifically bad or good?
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#15
Actually, I really like it how it is.
Raw & gritty sketching. Just keep your style going and let your mind wander. Find more words where you can do the action of and make do a set of them.
One of my friends has the natural ability to draw uber-adorable characters (think baby bunny adorable) and can do some good graffitti. But can't draw serious things to save his life.
Keep at it, and your style will evolve on it's own.
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Wait, hold on...

Is tits on a whale just a general exclamation, or is it specifically bad or good?

were you refering to my signiture?

coz it was my signiture..i didnt say it was tits on a whale
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#17
No, someone (I won't bother checking) just said that it's not very tits on a whale. I want to know if that means it's good, or bad... It's really confusing me.
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#18
oh okies haha i got kidna worried ...it was just coincidental
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