Its_Rock77
Anthony Green Fanboy <3
Join date: Jul 2007
1,501 IQ
#2
is this unfinished? It seemed to kinda just stop....

but other than that, this was really nice easy listening. I think you could do so much more with it though. Put in some cool leads and maybe a string arrangement or something.

this song has potential.
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...
Nightmarenny
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2006
165 IQ
#3
Quote by Its_Rock77
is this unfinished? It seemed to kinda just stop....

but other than that, this was really nice easy listening. I think you could do so much more with it though. Put in some cool leads and maybe a string arrangement or something.

this song has potential.

Yes, after finishing the second chorus it would hit a breakdown/solo of sorts then I'm not sure how to end it. I've been trying to add more lead but it keeps feeling sorta frazzled if I add something during the singing any suggestions how to go about it?
Its_Rock77
Anthony Green Fanboy <3
Join date: Jul 2007
1,501 IQ
#4
if you stick to the notes of the major scale, it should turn out sounding pretty nicely. It always does for me.
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...