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Cursed writers block. But yeah, so here it is, and I decided to write a guitar part to go along with it too (which I'm not too fond of but it's good enough to work for now).
I plan on showing my drummer the lyrics and the riffs and we can build off of it.
The song is planned to be screamed, all the way through, think AILD.
It'll probably need quite a bit of work as I wrote them in about 20 minutes.

Do Or Die (working title? any other suggestions would be nice too, cause I'm not too big on naming the stuff)

Verse:
Fall out,
Into the dark that is tonight.
You wouldn't know the difference,
Is this wrong or is it right.

Another day wasted,
Though time has shown me.
That through this happeneing,
I now stand alone

Pre-chorus guitar fill.

Chorus:

With no worries,
I'm free to fall.
It makes no difference,
I'll take it all.
Hope knows no boundaries,
And neither do I.
It's times like these,
It's do or die.


Verse:

No more,
This apathy is murderous.
You never meant to but,
You're killing all of us

Time's been wasted,
Why can't you see?
That through this happening,
I now stand alone.

Pre-chorus guitar fill.

Chorus:

With no worries,
I'm free to fall.
It makes no difference,
I'll take it all.
Hope knows no boundaries,
And neither do I.
It's times like these,
It's do or die.

Breakdown:

With no worries,
The time has come.
With no boundaries,
This bodies numb.
With no worries,
The time has come.
Here it is,
Do or die

Chorus:

With no worries,
I'm free to fall.
It makes no difference,
I'll take it all.
Hope knows no boundaries,
And neither do I.
It's times like these,
It's do or die.

I tweaked it a little bit as I typed it up here, but it's still incredibly 'iffy' to me.
So all help is greatly appreciated, and if I can manage to find the time I'll record the guitar track with the vocals and everything, these ones, and possibly any with changes made, so you can hear how it's supposed to sound.
Thanks in advance (if anyone does anything).
This is our last chance.
#2
how bout murderous apathy. these lyrics seem pretty dark. a title like that would go perfect with your lyrics!