#2
That sounds really good! I'm not much into the type of music, but it's very melodic and I can appreciate good talent when I hear it. Great use of instruments, great recording, and a pretty good voice too.

Good job!!

Check this out if you have the time.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=921419

Wadester
#3
Hey thanks man, people say the electro stuff fits my voice better then the Acoustic stuff I write. I'll check yours out as soon as I can
#4
the synth sounds at the intro sound thin and a little cheap...but i really dig all the sounds at 1:02, everything starts to blend really well. your vocals could use a little bit more "force" or proximity to the mic, or at least the illusion of proximity to the mic (boosting 5-7kHz a tad). not bad though, just a tad short, i think you could develop some of the ideas even more, maybe add some moroseness at the end!? haha, up to you. again, not bad though.

mind checking mine out? it's along the indie lines, so i think you might like it...
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=918667
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Misfits and AC/DC Covers + original recordings (jazz/punk, hardcore, "shredish").
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#5
Yeah man I really appreciate the feedback, I do need to work on the vocals, not too mention get a new mic where the top part is broken off :P but yeah I'll work on the vocals abit, this song is pretty short but I wrote it after a few days of playing with my new Mac so I'm just getting started, I'll def work on it I really appreciate the feedback!