#1
Let's get this out of the way first... I've never really written lyrics before, just the music, and I'd like to start. But then I found out that I couldn't really think of anything to write about, so I struggled with it for a few days and so today I decided to write about how I can't write anything.

The words escape my mind
whenever I open my mouth
I write nonexistent lines
On these paper scraps

So now I waiting
for the sun to rise
I am waiting until
I can open my eyes

But only time will tell
I haven't been here before
so open the door ask for more
till then I wish you well

and I am waiting until
I can have it all
I am waiting because
you fly before you fall


and that's all I have. Please be super harsh, I wanna not suck at this.
#3
It's easier to write lyrics when you have the music in your mind, and just write about how the music makes you feel and what thoughts it brings up.

I don't really like the third stanza, and the first doesn't have a lot of flow on lines 2 and 4, but overall it's a good first attempt. The rhyming is pretty good. Few grammar niggles but that's not really important.
Good job
#4
i thought the opening stanza was great, as is the title. perhaps the last line was a bit short though. unfortunately the rest seemed a little nothingy. without the explanation at the beginning i wouldn't have known what this was about. and a few lines didn't seem to fit at all, "til then i wish you well"?

i'd try develop the later bits, and try to get the meaning across better.

hope that helps.