Alright I thought this might be a cool idea for a song so I'm posting what I have so far. Any help/comments would be appreciated but be nice please.

Sometimes I wish
oh how I wish for
the bliss of ignorance

To never know
to never see
impending death infront of me

Like a gun at my head
I see my future
I'm soon dead.

That's all I have but...yeah tell me what ya think.