#1
So my other thread got closed cause I didn't read the rules, my bad. So here it is again, all rules applied.
It's the first song I've written in two years, but I'm incredibly 'iffy' with it, so I came here for some help.
The song is intended to be screamed all the way through, think AILD.


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Do Or Die:

Verse:
Fall out,
Into the dark that is tonight.
You wouldn't know the difference,
Is this wrong or is it right.

Another day wasted,
Though time has shown me.
That through this happeneing,
I now stand alone

Pre-chorus guitar fill.

Chorus:

With no worries,
I'm free to fall.
It makes no difference,
I'll take it all.
Hope knows no boundaries,
And neither do I.
It's times like these,
It's do or die.


Verse:

No more,
This apathy is murderous.
You never meant to but,
You're killing all of us

Time's been wasted,
Why can't you see?
That through this happening,
I now stand alone.

Pre-chorus guitar fill.

Chorus:

With no worries,
I'm free to fall.
It makes no difference,
I'll take it all.
Hope knows no boundaries,
And neither do I.
It's times like these,
It's do or die.

Breakdown:

With no worries,
The time has come.
With no boundaries,
This bodies numb.
With no worries,
The time has come.
Here it is,
Do or die

Chorus:

With no worries,
I'm free to fall.
It makes no difference,
I'll take it all.
Hope knows no boundaries,
And neither do I.
It's times like these,
It's do or die.

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I tweaked it a little as I typed it up, but that's that.
If I get around to it I might record the guitar track and the vocals to hear how it's going to go.
Thanks in advance.
This is our last chance.
Last edited by dragxthexwaters at Jul 29, 2008,