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Join date: Nov 2006
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A Bit Chatchy - have A Listen And See Wha You Think

btw this solo is the first solo i've ever composed :P
Join date: Aug 2004
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A bit catchy indeed. I liked the melody quite a lot.

The rhythm part could use a little spicing up though, especially in the verses, everything feels just a little too straight up on the beat.

The solo was pretty good, especially if it's the first one you've done.

I liked the break as well, although maybe you could have the guitars doing slightly different things?

Either way, is basic, but it's a still fairly solid. With some minor alterations and variations it could be great.
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Join date: Mar 2007
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i agree with all of what was said above.

the solo was sounded great mostly although a couple of notes sounded wrong

the rhythm i think needs spicing up a bit, make it more of a riff than power chord repeats

apart from that, great song