#1
this song for me was just kinda messing around but idk if i'll actually use it for the band. any criticism appreciated.

these signals are sending mixed messages
different colors and feelings, pleasure nonetheless
i'll be feeling great and possibly getting some rest
as my eyes begin to close but only halfway
walking slower as i approach the doorway

euphoric misery laid its eyes on me
could it possibly cure this apathy
a vicious circle with only one fix
either cold turkey or smokey go fish

the itches and twitches come on with full stride
but i have some fingernails so i'll be alright
some red on my face and some sweat on my palms
whats better than this conundrum undone
white pills, yellow pills, stupid thrills, cheap wheels
fancy bong, glass pipe, white joint, blunts tight
one can, two cans, bottle tops, opener stops
who do you call when you go over the top

euphoric misery laid its eyes on me
could it possibly cure this apathy
a vicious circle with only one fix
either cold turkey or smokey go fish
#2
That's really well written dude. Has a very straightedge vibe to it (obviously)
Quote by thefitz
Interesting. It turns out that there are people on the forum who play an upright bass. I'll make a note of that.

*makes note*

*puts note on wall*

*stares at note for a minute*

*sits back down and resumes doing what I was doing*
#3
I like this one. very real, your not trying to impress anyone and the vibe is very personable. just comes out nice, flow was good, and interesting throughout. krip job mang
#4
Thanks guys I appreciate it. Yeah drugs are bad but I still use them, just not as much.