i'm not watching the video, so i can't see your face, but i'm not really hearing much emotion in your voice, with Brent you can almost hear the pain behind the song. could be because his voice is deeper than yours, but that's what i'm getting from this, other than that it's pretty damn good
Exar Kun of the UG Jedi Order, PM tamargoguitar to join!!

I like you, but you're crazy. Oh look, a flying monkey....

I fart in your general direction. Now go away or I shall taunt you a second time.