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OK. First off. I wrote this over two years ago.... I was just a kid then, a ripe 12 :P Cliches and lack of flow may be prevalent. It's rather short. Anyways, here it goes:

Garden of Burden

In the garden of burden,
Where all the lost memories go.
Nobody knows where the lonley road goes...

Lost but not found,
A statement that's so profound.
Dreaming of how it could actually be...

In the garden of burden,
I need to escape from here.
Running away from our pain and shame...

Come and go,
Stay for the show.
Wondering why I'm still confined here,

In the garden of burden.


Well wasn't that lovely. I accept criticism, because I obviously need it for this little piece here. Thanks for your time.