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That's petty ****ing good for one month man. But, right after the first tapping and hammer sequence, your single notes need a little bit of vibrato. Notes that are high on the neck and not vibratoed are earsplitting. But it sounds good.

If you don't know what I mean, look up Kristopher Dahl's Vibrato video, it helped me alot.

If that's a month, imagine what a year will be, just keep practicing and don't give up if it gets tough one day, it will help in the long run.