#1
I'm fourteen and want to be a writer, tell me what you think please?



My Clock:

In the shadows where I walk, you look straight at the clock. its 3pm yes its 3pm and no ones there to save us but the liars seem to crave us when it all begins once again.

Its 3 am, yes its 3 am and the ones without a name arent to blame because baby its only 3 am.

As all the colors seem to fade away all seems to go to gray. From nine to noon, from nine to noon.

No ones there to save us, and the liars seem to crave us.

I said, The liars seem to crave us and no ones there to save us!

Because the clock has stopped.

Because my clock has stopped!

By: Chance Karbo


Always Believe

I'll tell you straight out
I have too much to think about
But that's not the way it used to be
I don't act the same I miss the old me
When you fall down
Straight and hard right on the ground
Too many annoying huge crowds
I feel like there is no such thing as real
Do you know what its like for no one to know how you feel?
If only I can control the emotions
I'm sorry I don't need any donations
Yeah you say you love me
But your lies eventually consume me
I need hope for the future
But I am no leader
I am too quiet and I give up too easy
But I will never stop believing
When I go down
I get back up
And never look back
I try to stay on track
But the bravery to tell the truth is what I lack
The problems wont just go away
Because that's not how life works
So just listen to me and
Have a curious smirk
Live life the best you can and always believe


By: Chance Karbo


I'm astonished by your ability to write, to follow the burning lights of the night, to stand for what's right.

When you show up to make the world understandable in your own perspective and views but when you back stab the one who meant the most to you.

Is low and unwanted, it doesn't matter how much you were taunted but that you handled the pain, so you can gain hope for the future.

When you want to run away because the peace of the world has gone a-stray, think for your actions but notice other peoples' reactions.

And follow what's not true but the ones that try to adjust and follow you.

By: Chance Karbo


Hello
It's Me Again
Well mother ma'am can you tell me when
You can stop the evil monsters from under my bed
Will the doctors give me the correct "meds"?
Because I think the horrors of this world will be dead.
Do you understand me at this moment?
Cause I think most of the people are PHONY?
Unless most of them show me
How to stop blending in
Because the others cant win
But just in case lets all get clean
Man this world is full of fiends
Hey lets play a game of Twenty Questions
Ok class anyone got any suggestions?
You can stop the evil monsters from under my bed
Will the doctors give me the correct "meds"?
Because I think the horrors of this world will be dead.
Lets just press stop, rewind, and play it all over again
They see a band like us and they get scared as hell
Because we really aren't your type, but Oh Well.
Hey mommy is it a sin to kill?
Yes son but if I die,
I wont include you in my will!!
Someone started this world but
We all act like it's a so stale
You can stop the evil monsters from under my bed
Will the doctors give me the correct "meds"?
Because I think the horrors of this world will be dead.
Lets just press stop, rewind, and play it all over again
They see a band like us they get scared as hell
Because we really aren't your type, Oh Well.
Hey mommy is it a sin to kill
Because we really aren't your type, but Oh Well.


By Chance Karbo


Followers:

So you look at me,
and you can't look away.

So you look at me,
your voice goes a-stray.

So you look at me,
and your thoughts can't get through

So you look at me,
because I'm not looking at you.

By Chance Karbo
#2
Most of them are pretty sweet. The biggest thing for me is that some of them have sort of dull topics. Almost like you were assigned in a class to write about one specific boring thing.
That was only for some of them the rest were good though. You really just need a little inspiration. I am fourteen and have written a couple songs also but I mainly focus on guitar at this point.
P.S. pretty girls work very nicely for the inspiration part hahahaha