My two cents:

The vocals at points were overbearing. The drums in the background get boring after a while, but I like your deliverance. It's relaxing, mellow piece. Overall, I like it. But try to change up the drums, and perhaps do something about that annoying synth. Maybe change the sound or something. The piano section can be tweaked a little bit too.

nice elements in here - little piano riff works well over the slow tempo...vocals fit nicely for this type of song...lots of atmosphere...i agree that the drums are a little whatever and the synth doesn't do it for me either...regardless, it has some potential

cheers, d

Last edited by dee rok at Aug 2, 2008,