#1
Picture Frame Memory

(Chorus)
This is what's centered on the picture frame
You and me together dancing through the rain
With your eyes focused and you're holding me tight
Never have I ever seen you smile at me so bright

(Verse1)
Swirling and dancing with rain in her hair
Acting like she doesn't have a care
Whispering winds swiftly blow me around
I look in her eyes and I know I am found
Watching the treetops dance their sweet dance
Seeing you look up, smile, and glance

(Pre-Chorus)
That picture is stuck in all my frames
All memories on the wall

(Repeat Chorus)

(Verse2)
The flowers are blooming all around us
The rainbow appears as just another plus
We fall to the ground, the grass on our backs
The sky looks down on us and does it's acts
The clouds fly by without a care in the world
They curl around, all soft an swirled
The moon greets the sun as they share the same sky
For only moments until they say their goodbye

(Repeat Pre-Chorus)
(Repeat Chorus)

(Verse3)
You look over at me, a smile on your face
Are you looking at me or am I just in space
I smile back at you as I leaned toward your lips
The softness of your kiss as my hands hold your hips
The rain pours down yet neither of us care
In an embrace that nobodycould ever tear
This feeling you bring is like nothing I have felt
Like a drug so warm, I could forever melt

(Repeat Pre-Chorus)
(Repeat Chorus)

(Bridge)
The rain finally stops, The rainbow stays high
Our lips pull apart as we look toward the sky
The moon escapes from the depths of the clouds
It looks down upon us through all of the crowds
I look in your eyes and know you'll always be mine
The way you look, and the way you feel
Nothing else could ever be so divine

(Outro)
I will love you forever, No matter what will occur
You are my one and only, The one I will always prefer
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Last edited by popeye100 at Jul 31, 2008,
#2
asking for crit for crit

*reported*
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#3
oh... i didnt know that was against the rules... my bad...
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my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


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Well, not really haha!


#4
i fixed it...sorry again
Quote by cpt_pimp
my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


Quote by leg end
Well, not really haha!


#5
I do like the pre chorus and the outro. I think they're not catchy, but memorable, if you know what I mean.

Nice work
#7
dang yall confuse me....first i cant, now i can.... dang man...
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my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


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Well, not really haha!


#8
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dang yall confuse me....first i cant, now i can.... dang man...


You can, zansas a mod.
#9
yea i know now thanx...anybody with an actual crit now?
Quote by cpt_pimp
my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


Quote by leg end
Well, not really haha!