#2
Once the beated started I was vaguely reminded of Massive Attack's Teardrop (i consider that a good thing). Although music that is deliberately at a different tempo to the drums or in a different time signature can be cool I think there is too much of it on this track and that it would be good if the piano and the beat where in time for most of the music.

Although there is nothing to say you must have guitar in your music this is a guitar forum.

Here's mine anyway: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=919948