#1
Structure born out of connection
Like when the millionth line finally forms the circle
spinning around and blending with itself

A string, a golden sequence
forming natures open spirals
shining into beauty
like the rays from the sun

Forming your own center theory
Watching the world dance
the action of the senses,
the next line of the sequence
is open for you.
So good to see you once again.
I thought that you were hiding.
And you thought that I had run away.
Chasing the tail of dogma.
I opened my eye and there we were .
#2
Wow. I just love this. It looks like something I would've written.. Like, same style and use of adjectives and breaks. lol

I would break it down.. But it's beautiful... The closest I could get to nitpicking would be to say that "millionth" sounds over-cliched... Maybe change it to "three hundred and sixtieth?" And maybe look at dropping "the" from in front of "rays."

Very nicely done. Care to look at mine? http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=923271 =)