Poll: I Cum ______.
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Red
3 43%
Green
4 57%
Voters: 7.
#1
4 Points

Love Is Blue

and-I-fell-in-

with gasping breaths and crucifix arms thrown wide.

Sodden clothes as magnets

to a sea bed I'm just dying to sink in to.

Show me a sandcastle underwater

and I'll show you tides from the dark side of the moon.


Endorphins released in rising bubbles;

your bobbers for my fishhooked smile.

'Chocolate masquerades in Love and Charades',

said reproachfully, with a Ghirardelli square

floating up into your watery mouth.


Asphyxiation? More than a fling;

I'm drowning here, if only in dreams.



Melting In The Jackpot

Slipping on cracks, you’ve found in yourself,
falling back on words you never knew were true.
But florescent is different from incandescent,
incandescent is just half an incantation away from descent.

Maybe even decent,
is this new light to behold the bee hive.
Play your cards wrong and you might learn to bee-have
in a world where it only matters to be and have,
through the eyes of dainty deities.

A looking glass of transparent gold
that tells me where your heart is.
Somewhere between the Cardiac
and arctic arrest,
where it bleeds,
where the home is.

Sweet as apples
keeping the doctor away.
Please don’t say
that I have one more day to live;
I’d rather die
not doing what I’ve always wanted,
instead I’ll haunt it.

Ghosts of your past like Ebenezer,
tell me,
“that you’ll end up like Timmy.”
Belittled, in one negative integer
below sea level,
can you see me levelled?
Adding one line for each one of mine you’ve chewed.

Luckily I can only count to 7 (7 7), staying one step ahead of you.
#2
I really like the green one. It's got good messages, good metaphors, and good wording... None of which I see in the red one.
#3
i can has more votes pleaze?

(that's asking for votes in general, not votes for me specifically.
I'm not low enough to beg.
Yet.)
I owe a ton of people critiques.

If you're one of them, please PM me.

I have trouble keeping track.
#4
get your last votes in, this closes in three hours.
I owe a ton of people critiques.

If you're one of them, please PM me.

I have trouble keeping track.