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GAURDIAN ANGEL

in this wicked world
haunted by a blackened sky
the innocent victims
reminisce of the days before they died

when they are there, you'll know
feeling your heart begin to slow
and shivering as your blood runs cold
the spectre lets out a soul cringing cry

on wings of blinding light
descending from the sky
a shining blade, stained with blood
with no mercy and no love
for the wicked
comes the avenger of innocent lives lost
the harvest of your soul is the cost
for your heinous crimes

so angelic in their grace
not the slightest of anger in the face
until the warm smile turns to a horrid grin
and you feel the blade plunge deep within
you take your last breath

no more fear, no more sin
now that peace is found within
free now from our bonds
free to enter heaven's gates

gaurdian angels
walk among us
yes gaurdian angels
are watching over me
#2
in this wicked world
haunted by a blackened sky
the innocent victims
reminisce of the days before they died

meh. wicked world is so... mm cliche. personally the start really doesnt hook me in

when they are there, you'll know
feeling your heart begin to slow
and shivering as your blood runs cold
the spectre lets out a soul cringing cry
personally i find this a little gaudy. i personally enjoy more subtle gore

on wings of blinding light
descending from the sky
a shining blade, stained with blood
with no mercy and no love
for the wicked
comes the avenger of innocent lives lost
the harvest of your soul is the cost
for your heinous crimes
ugh. the oldest sins int he newest ways. try to come up with somethign other then wicked.

so angelic in their grace
not the slightest of anger in the face
until the warm smile turns to a horrid grin
and you feel the blade plunge deep within
you take your last breath
mm interesting i suppose. if ur into poe.

no more fear, no more sin
now that peace is found within
free now from our bonds
free to enter heaven's gates
no cooment

gaurdian angels
walk among us
yes gaurdian angels
are watching over me
no comment

overall. seemed wanting. you have details ect. but i really dont feel any emotion there. it's all blood and gore like we in a movie. had i wanted a bloody movie i would go watch sin city or kill bill. but i think u should look at The Dark Knight. it is subtl but so dark taht it leaves you thinking and wondering, i think it really captures the darkness. it is the same for writting. if i want blood and guts poe is the way to go, but his writting is so.. sublime. but i think u need to look at something more subtle for this. the bluntness is simply.. dry.
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im sure may be aware of this but there is already an amazing song by The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus called Your Guardian Angel.

And its spelt 'Guardian' not gaurdian. sorry if thats being pedantic but great lyrics nonetheless