Maybe you could try to incorporate some varying rhythms to spice it up.
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On second thought, **** tuning forks. You best be carrying around a grand piano that was tuned by an Italian
First off, I enjoyed the riffs but you need to speed it up or add some vocals or something cos it is the same rhythm the whole way through and after a while it just needs a bit of variation. The playing sounds solid, you just need to experiment with tempo and rhythm to keep the listener's attention.

C4C: http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=913364
Interestingly, I just listened to your other stuff and it is a lot more exciting, particularly Eternally Cold, your playing and vocals suit that style very well