#1
c4c.

Clark Kent Syndrome
Card sharks,
Unfinished story arcs.
A heart that stops but never starts.
Reality departs, leaving
Linear patterns,
Trips to Saturn.
Spaceships spirals Earthbound
Towards love lost but never found.
And I'm still trying to figure out
What cards you're holding.
#2
This felt a bit detached, like it needs more glue.
Didn't like the 'reality departs, leaving' bit. Neither the rhyme nor the word afterwards fitted in my opinion.
The 'Saturn' bit felt a bit drained in. With no mention of it beforehand, the name being used as a second rhyme was annoying, felt simple.
Would be nicer with an introduction to the space aspect before; I don't think it bears any relation to the rest of what you've written.

This could be brilliant though, just needs some tweaks.
I've got a piece on the first page (not in my sig), would love a crit.
There's only one thing we can do to thwart the plot of these albino shape-shifting lizard BITCHES!