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One last time
3 60%
Minus Stephen Hawking
2 40%
Voters: 5.
#1
winner takes Gold. other gets Silver.
4 days. do not vote for your own piece.



One last time

A pull
of the rings off your fingers
as you slide them into your front khaki pocket.
A pull
like the wind
trapped in a box sealed with masking tape
and a sharpie scratch of a name.
Like the wind,
trapped in the still air of a bedroom,
fresh from the deep wormhole of your father's throat
after countless years of drinking.
Like the wind,
trapped in a recently emptied home
gazing at the bindings of his dusty photo albums
that have not been opened for years.
A pull like the wind,
holding itself still and apprehensive
as you twist the handle and blow the cobwebs
off of his ancient windows
to let his shadow shine gloriously through them,
one last time.


-- Minus Stephen Hawking --

as light can be measured in strength
and torn apart by physics
every physicist can damn his mind
and blindly walk towards it

and though the left-minded writer’s
knowledge of physics may be slim
he knows life well enough
that he can write light-hearted poems.



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#2
No poll?
Vivamus mea Lesbia, atque amemus,
rumoresque senum seueriorum
omnes unius aestimemus assis!
#5
Second had a charm. It was a like a girl who you are lke "Eugh" but then she bats her eyelids and you melt.

first didn't quite show enough flesh for me.
Last edited by Jammydude44 at Aug 2, 2008,