kiki94bass
Registered User
Join date: Oct 2007
151 IQ
#2
It has a great melody but I think that you shouldn't repeat every riff that much. Still, what do I know I'm only fourteen.

(C4C-the bass solo in the signature tnx)
SHEEM
Registered User
Join date: Nov 2007
521 IQ
#3
Kiki, don't act like the smallest kid here. I'm smaller
Ayways, nice solo. Great tune, but you like "Overused it". After two or so repeats, it begins to lose depth... Under The Sun is better, but this is also nice. Has a very "foresty" feel in it, The riff is awesome, you could do some variations of it, instead of repeating it to death.