#2
It has potential, but to me, it was nothing impressive. The guitars were kinda' generic and a little boring. I thought the harmonization was cool. The vocals were boring, very predictable, and the lyrics were A+ grade either. It needs work, is what I'm getting at.

I would appreciate if you could take a little time and check out my piece:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=siNNn4-e-Go