ratmblink123
Classic
Join date: Jul 2006
1,427 IQ
#2
I want a... SUBURBAN HOME!


I thought it was pretty good, like you said, I could tell there were a few mistakes, but overall it was pretty funny.

EDIT: I commented it.
ok, yeah. my name is silly because I signed up when I was 13.

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BrianApocalypse
Prozac Junkie
Join date: May 2004
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#3
Why it was good:
- The mom was hot. I'd love to Gene Simmons her.

Why it was not good:
- It needs some kind of very light background noise at the start, because it sounds unnaturally quiet whenever there isn't dialogue.
- It had sh*t music in the middle.
StreetLight3989
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Join date: Jan 2007
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#4
Quote by BrianApocalypse
Why it was good:
- The mom was hot. I'd love to Gene Simmons her.

Why it was not good:
- It needs some kind of very light background noise at the start, because it sounds unnaturally quiet whenever there isn't dialogue.
- It had sh*t music in the middle.

Yeah, I should have put noise in the beginning, and the music is a Decendents clip I took from online and made it shake and look like home video like the two main characters were taping it, because well, it was about a Decendents album. Also, I can't watch my own work no matter what, even if it's amazing for some reason it's hard to go back and watch it.
I'm the same as I was when I was six years old
And oh my god I feel so damn old
I don't really feel anything
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lolmnt
Earth of the Butt
Join date: Sep 2006
4,159 IQ
#5
Was he wearing a Pink Floyd shirt when he was supposed to be punk?

There was noise when nobody was talking.

I would have used a different song at then end.

Overall I'll give it a 7 out of 10.
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StreetLight3989
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Join date: Jan 2007
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#6
Quote by element4433
Was he wearing a Pink Floyd shirt when he was supposed to be punk?

There was noise when nobody was talking.

I would have used a different song at then end.

Overall I'll give it a 7 out of ten.

The Pink Floyd shirt was unavoidable, the kid brought 4 shirts with him not knowing the roll yet and he brought Bowie, Pink Floyd, Led Zeppelin, and Chiodos. Obviously, we put the Bowie shirt on the other kid but we had Zeppelin, Chiodos, and Pink Floyd to choose from so we just went with Pink Floyd. About the song thing, I was going to do a different Descendents song, but I'm a Final Cut n00b and I forgot how to actually upload the song onto it, lol. Anyway, I agree on the rating, it was decent, but not my best work.
I'm the same as I was when I was six years old
And oh my god I feel so damn old
I don't really feel anything
original=punk
Banned
Join date: Jan 2007
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#7
I'd use a different song at the end. I can't hear what they're listening to on the stereo. That's my only gripes, other than that, s'cool.
StreetLight3989
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Join date: Jan 2007
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#8
Yeah, I was debating whether to put music on the stereo scenes or not. I mean, I could've put low music on them, but I think it worked out fine this way.
I'm the same as I was when I was six years old
And oh my god I feel so damn old
I don't really feel anything
sargasm
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Join date: May 2003
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#9
I liked the guy's bowie shirt.

I also liked the mom.

That was really good overall. It just seemed a bit weird when he was supposed to be listening to music but there wasn't any music.
StreetLight3989
Registered User
Join date: Jan 2007
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#11
I want to marry her and be your dad...
I'm the same as I was when I was six years old
And oh my god I feel so damn old
I don't really feel anything
BrianApocalypse
Prozac Junkie
Join date: May 2004
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#12
It's a bastard not being able to enjoy your own work.

Luckily I am extremely self absorbed and don't have that problem.
crustyreed
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Join date: Oct 2007
493 IQ
#13
I liked it. i felt the 'concert' was a little long though.
StreetLight3989
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Join date: Jan 2007
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#14
Quote by crustyreed
I liked it. i felt the 'concert' was a little long though.

Yeah, I was debating whether to cut it, but I decided to leave the whole youtube video in.
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And oh my god I feel so damn old
I don't really feel anything
I_Pwn
is gonna find you
Join date: Aug 2006
2,803 IQ
#16
I enjoyed this. My main beefs were that there should have been music while he was listening to the music, and that there should have been a different ending song.
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neidnarb11890
so bored with the USA
Join date: Mar 2006
270 IQ
#17
Quote by I_Pwn
I enjoyed this. My main beefs were that there should have been music while he was listening to the music, and that there should have been a different ending song.

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Quote by crustyreed
I liked it. i felt the 'concert' was a little long though.

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kaptink
whoa-oh-oh
Join date: Jun 2006
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#18
You should have dressed the main guy up in square glasses and a tie!
BrianApocalypse
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#19
Quote by original=punk
Yeah, the mom was quite bangable.


Yeah, even more so if she hadn't been a christian fundamentalist.